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Cleaning up a dining hall...website
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Problem
I am making a website that takes a bunch of dining hall information and puts it all together in a neater (and hopefully more mobile friendly) form.
Here is the link:
https://googledrive.com/host/0By7Z_HHj2VhnWmlhbWl4aF8xdFU/nuEats.html
It's a little incomplete at the moment, but what it does is the bar up top shows you how much a "meal" is worth at a university convenience store (there is an arrow that is usually there, but it is current gone because it is 2:21 AM, which is after closing time).
Also, there are links to dining halls and their menus. My first question is: I don't know a lot about HTML and CSS best practices.
I have tried to keep everything nice and neat, but I was wondering if someone could just browse through my code and see
The second point is especially important to me because I don't want anything to be ambiguous or hard to understand in my code, since I inevitably will have to pass it down.
HTML
```
nuEats
nuEats
Equivalency Meal Exchange Rate:
1835 Hinman
Menu
Allison
Menu
Here is the link:
https://googledrive.com/host/0By7Z_HHj2VhnWmlhbWl4aF8xdFU/nuEats.html
It's a little incomplete at the moment, but what it does is the bar up top shows you how much a "meal" is worth at a university convenience store (there is an arrow that is usually there, but it is current gone because it is 2:21 AM, which is after closing time).
Also, there are links to dining halls and their menus. My first question is: I don't know a lot about HTML and CSS best practices.
I have tried to keep everything nice and neat, but I was wondering if someone could just browse through my code and see
- Is the code efficient
- Is the code clear and concise?
The second point is especially important to me because I don't want anything to be ambiguous or hard to understand in my code, since I inevitably will have to pass it down.
HTML
```
nuEats
nuEats
Equivalency Meal Exchange Rate:
1835 Hinman
Menu
Allison
Menu
Solution
From a once over,
DRY (Dont' Repeat Yourself)
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You have a number of these blocks that seem all copy pasted:
You could consider having a JavaScript array holding just the restaurant names and links and then building the HTML with templating. Furthermore I am not sure why you need an h4 in a div in a div, you should be able to style the top div in such a manner that the HTML would look like
Style
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DRY (Dont' Repeat Yourself)
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You have a number of these blocks that seem all copy pasted:
Sargent
Menu
You could consider having a JavaScript array holding just the restaurant names and links and then building the HTML with templating. Furthermore I am not sure why you need an h4 in a div in a div, you should be able to style the top div in such a manner that the HTML would look like
Sargent
Menu
Style
- Don't skip the newlines in
returnDayandreturnMonth
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formatTime could use a ternary, return (i
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createEqRateBars is mixing logic/calculation and creation of UI elements, you should split that out in 2 functions. It looks messy and too tightly coupled now.
Functionality
- It seems like your code in
formatDate will return 11st and 13rd, that seems wrong
All in all
Time/date handling is a pain in any language, and I think you pulled it off pretty well. I probably would have encapsulated EqRates` into an object with helper functions to make the code a little more readable, but other than that I would not maintaining code like this.Code Snippets
<!-- Sargent -->
<div class="panel panel-default">
<div class="panel-heading">
<h4 class="panel-title">
Sargent
<a href="https://m-nucuisine.sodexomyway.com/images/Sargent3_tcm238-12910.htm">
<div class="menu">Menu</div>
</a>
</h4>
</div>
</div><!-- Sargent -->
<div class="panel panel-default awesomerestaurantclass">
Sargent
<a href="https://m-nucuisine.sodexomyway.com/images/Sargent3_tcm238-12910.htm">
<div class="menu">Menu</div>
</a>
</div>Context
StackExchange Code Review Q#45067, answer score: 3
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