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Generating a password to save to a .txt file

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Problem

Here is my basic password generator which saves your password to a .txt file which you can choose the name of etc.

import random
import string
import os.path
#random numbers section
num1 = random.randrange(100,999)
number_section =  num1
#random letters section
string.letters = 'abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyzABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ!@#$%^&*()'
let1 = random.choice(string.letters)
let2 = random.choice(string.letters)
let3 = random.choice(string.letters)
let4 = random.choice(string.letters)
let5 = random.choice(string.letters)
let6 = random.choice(string.letters)
let7 = random.choice(string.letters)
let8 = random.choice(string.letters)
letters_section = let1 + let2 + let3 + let4 + let5 + let6 + let7 + let8
#letters and numbers combination
password = str(number_section) + letters_section
#input section
password_for = raw_input('This password is for: ')
your_pass =  'Your password for' + ' ' + password_for + ' ' + 'is:' + ' ' + password
print your_pass
#save section
save_path = 'C:\Users\Charles\Desktop\Passes'
name_of_file = raw_input("What is the name of the file: ")
completeName = os.path.join(save_path, name_of_file+".txt")         
file1 = open(completeName, "w")
toFile = your_pass
file1.write(toFile)
file1.close()


This will make a .txt file with a line such as:


Your password for IBM bluemix is: 451juoxQYky

How can I make it 'stronger'? Are there any major holes in it? How can I make it more compact?

This is just a personal project I'm doing to improve my python knowledge.

Solution

By making it more Pythonic for one:

string.letters = 'abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyzABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ!@#$%^&*()'
let1 = random.choice(string.letters)
let2 = random.choice(string.letters)
let3 = random.choice(string.letters)
let4 = random.choice(string.letters)
let5 = random.choice(string.letters)
let6 = random.choice(string.letters)
let7 = random.choice(string.letters)
let8 = random.choice(string.letters)
letters_section = let1 + let2 + let3 + let4 + let5 + let6 + let7 + let8


should be:

''.join(random.choice(string.letters) for _ in range(length))


Now instead of a hard coded length you can ask the user for a length or easily change it by changing one variable instead of adding or deleting lines.

Instead of this:

file1 = open(completeName, "w")
toFile = your_pass
file1.write(toFile)
file1.close()


You want:

with open(completeName, "w") as file1:
    file1.write(your_pass)  # no need to assign a new variable


The with context manager will automatically handle closing the file for you.

This seems to be a pattern in your code but its wholly unnecessary:

num1 = random.randrange(100,999)
number_section =  num1


Just use num1 or save the output of randrange() to number_section directly there is no need for an intermediate variable.

So in the end you can simplify to:

import random
import string
import os.path

num1 = random.randrange(100,999)
string.letters = 'abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyzABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ!@#$%^&*()'

letters_section = ''.join(random.choice(string.letters) for _ in range(8))  # change 8 to a variable if you want to ask the user for a length or have it passed as an argument
password = str(number_section) + letters_section

password_for = raw_input('This password is for: ')
your_pass =  'Your password for {} is: {}'.format(password_for, password)
print(your_pass)

save_path = 'C:\Users\Charles\Desktop\Passes'
name_of_file = raw_input("What is the name of the file: ")
completeName = os.path.join(save_path, name_of_file+".txt")         
with open(completeName, "w") as file1:
    file1.write(your_pass)


Or even more simply:

def gen_password(length):
    choices = string.digits + string.punctuation + string.ascii_letters
    return ''.join(random.choice(choices) for _ in range(length))

>>> gen_password(13)
'7P~R6dSy>> gen_password(20)
"Q{qHs6ahwj^EaT_'t,.7"
>>> gen_password(11)
'XDi49z+;^?='

Code Snippets

string.letters = 'abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyzABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ!@#$%^&*()'
let1 = random.choice(string.letters)
let2 = random.choice(string.letters)
let3 = random.choice(string.letters)
let4 = random.choice(string.letters)
let5 = random.choice(string.letters)
let6 = random.choice(string.letters)
let7 = random.choice(string.letters)
let8 = random.choice(string.letters)
letters_section = let1 + let2 + let3 + let4 + let5 + let6 + let7 + let8
''.join(random.choice(string.letters) for _ in range(length))
file1 = open(completeName, "w")
toFile = your_pass
file1.write(toFile)
file1.close()
with open(completeName, "w") as file1:
    file1.write(your_pass)  # no need to assign a new variable
num1 = random.randrange(100,999)
number_section =  num1

Context

StackExchange Code Review Q#101660, answer score: 19

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