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Problem
I was working on a timer code in pure JavaScript and would like to know any pointers to improve:
Features
JSFiddle
`function timer() {
var time = {
sec: 00,
min: 00,
hr: 00
};
var finalLimit = null,
warnLimit = null,
errorLimit = null;
var max = 59;
var interval = null;
function init(_hr, _min, _sec) {
time["hr"] = _hr ? _hr : 0;
time["min"] = _min ? _min : 0;
time["sec"] = _sec ? _sec : 0;
printAll();
}
function setLimit(fLimit, wLimit, eLimit) {
finalLimit = fLimit;
warnLimit = wLimit;
errorLimit = eLimit;
}
function printAll() {
print("sec");
print("min");
print("hr");
}
function update(str) {
time[str] ++;
time[str] = time[str] % 60;
if (time[str] == 0) {
str == "sec" ? update("min") : update("hr");
}
print(str);
}
function print(str) {
var _time = time[str].toString().length == 1 ? "0" + time[str] : time[str];
document.getElementById("lbl" + str).innerHTML = _time;
}
function validateTimer() {
var className = "";
var secs = time.sec + (time.min 60) + (time.hr 60 * 60);
if (secs >= finalLimit) {
stopTimer();
} else if (secs >= errorLimit) {
className = "error";
} else if (secs >= warnLimit) {
className = "warn";
}
var element = document.getElementsByTagName("span");
document.getElementById("lblsec").className = className;
}
function startTimer() {
init();
if (interval) stopTimer();
interval = setInterval(function() {
update("sec");
validateTimer();
}, 1000);
}
function stopTimer() {
window.clearInterval(interval);
}
function resetInterval() {
stopTimer();
time["sec"] = time["min"] = time["hr"] = 0;
printAll();
startTimer();
}
return {
'start': startTimer,
'stop': s
Features
- Start/ Stop/ Reset on click of a button.
- Set limit to clock.
- Update class name for warning and error based on threshold timer.
JSFiddle
`function timer() {
var time = {
sec: 00,
min: 00,
hr: 00
};
var finalLimit = null,
warnLimit = null,
errorLimit = null;
var max = 59;
var interval = null;
function init(_hr, _min, _sec) {
time["hr"] = _hr ? _hr : 0;
time["min"] = _min ? _min : 0;
time["sec"] = _sec ? _sec : 0;
printAll();
}
function setLimit(fLimit, wLimit, eLimit) {
finalLimit = fLimit;
warnLimit = wLimit;
errorLimit = eLimit;
}
function printAll() {
print("sec");
print("min");
print("hr");
}
function update(str) {
time[str] ++;
time[str] = time[str] % 60;
if (time[str] == 0) {
str == "sec" ? update("min") : update("hr");
}
print(str);
}
function print(str) {
var _time = time[str].toString().length == 1 ? "0" + time[str] : time[str];
document.getElementById("lbl" + str).innerHTML = _time;
}
function validateTimer() {
var className = "";
var secs = time.sec + (time.min 60) + (time.hr 60 * 60);
if (secs >= finalLimit) {
stopTimer();
} else if (secs >= errorLimit) {
className = "error";
} else if (secs >= warnLimit) {
className = "warn";
}
var element = document.getElementsByTagName("span");
document.getElementById("lblsec").className = className;
}
function startTimer() {
init();
if (interval) stopTimer();
interval = setInterval(function() {
update("sec");
validateTimer();
}, 1000);
}
function stopTimer() {
window.clearInterval(interval);
}
function resetInterval() {
stopTimer();
time["sec"] = time["min"] = time["hr"] = 0;
printAll();
startTimer();
}
return {
'start': startTimer,
'stop': s
Solution
It looks really good! Here are a few points;
I don't like the arguments in your
I would prefer an Object argument in this case.
This makes it obvious at call time which argument is which.
Your var declarations are inconsistent here:
Pick either to comma separate them or not. Not both.
In a couple of places you use
You CSS selectors are very generic. This is generally a bad thing as they will easily collide with other styles the moment you integrate it into a real page.
I favour BEM syntax, which would make it look something like this;
Note I've also removed your
In your code you then attach the handlers;
I don't like the arguments in your
setLimit and init functions, especially because some of them are optional.I would prefer an Object argument in this case.
function setLimit(limits) {
finalLimit = limits.final;
warnLimit = limits.warn;
errorLimit = limits.error;
}
this.setLimit({
final: 10,
warn: 5,
error: 8
});This makes it obvious at call time which argument is which.
Your var declarations are inconsistent here:
var finalLimit = null,
warnLimit = null,
errorLimit = null;
var max = 59;
var interval = null;Pick either to comma separate them or not. Not both.
In a couple of places you use
== instead of ===. Generally we stick to === for reasons.You CSS selectors are very generic. This is generally a bad thing as they will easily collide with other styles the moment you integrate it into a real page.
I favour BEM syntax, which would make it look something like this;
00
: 00
: 00
Start
Stop
Reset
Note I've also removed your
onclick handlers in favour of interaction specific classes. I prefix my classnames with js- if they are used solely for JavaScript selectors. This helps decouple the CSS and JavaScript. In your code you then attach the handlers;
document.querySelectorAll('.js-start-timer')[0]
.addEventListener('click', startTimer);Code Snippets
function setLimit(limits) {
finalLimit = limits.final;
warnLimit = limits.warn;
errorLimit = limits.error;
}
this.setLimit({
final: 10,
warn: 5,
error: 8
});var finalLimit = null,
warnLimit = null,
errorLimit = null;
var max = 59;
var interval = null;<div class="timer">
<div class="timer__labels">
<span id="timer__hours-label">00</span>
: <span id="timer__minutes-label">00</span>
: <span id="timer__seconds-label">00</span>
</div>
<button class="timer__btn js-start-timer">Start</button>
<button class="timer__btn js-end-timer">Stop</button>
<button class="timer__btn js-reset-timer">Reset</button>
</div>document.querySelectorAll('.js-start-timer')[0]
.addEventListener('click', startTimer);Context
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