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I'm currently learning Haskell, and as one of my first "proper" programs have created a mathematics quiz. It works like this:
I've implemented the operator part of question generation using an
The
My code is as follows:
```
import System.Random
randomSensibleInts :: Int -> StdGen -> [Int]
randomSensibleInts quantity = take quantity . randomRs (1, 10)
data Operator = Add | Subtract | Multiply deriving (Eq, Enum)
instance Show Operator where
show op = case op of
Add -> "+"
Subtract -> "-"
Multiply -> "*"
instance Random Operator where
random gen = case randomR (0, 2) gen of
(item, gen') -> (toEnum item, gen')
randomR (lo, hi) gen = case randomR (fromEnum lo, fromEnum hi) gen of
(item, gen') -> (toEnum item, gen')
genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Int, Operator, Int, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (numbers !! 0, operator, numbers !! 1, gen')
where numbers = randomSensibleInts 2 gen
- A question is generated, with two numbers from 1 to 10 which need to be either added, multiplied or subtracted, for example
3 * 6.
- The question is presented to the user, and they can write their answer and press Enter.
- If the user's answer is the same as the actual answer to the question, they get one point towards their score. If the answer is incorrect their points stay the same.
- This repeats 10 times, and the user's points are shown to them at the end.
I've implemented the operator part of question generation using an
Operator data type with a Random instance. The numbers are generated with a randomSensibleInts x gen function, which generates x random numbers between 1 and 10.The
askQuestion function uses IO to get the user's answer, returning True if the answer was correct and False otherwise. Finally, in main, the askQuestion function is called 10 times, returning a [Bool]. fromEnum is then used to count True as one point and False as zero, which combined with sum creates a point total.My code is as follows:
```
import System.Random
randomSensibleInts :: Int -> StdGen -> [Int]
randomSensibleInts quantity = take quantity . randomRs (1, 10)
data Operator = Add | Subtract | Multiply deriving (Eq, Enum)
instance Show Operator where
show op = case op of
Add -> "+"
Subtract -> "-"
Multiply -> "*"
instance Random Operator where
random gen = case randomR (0, 2) gen of
(item, gen') -> (toEnum item, gen')
randomR (lo, hi) gen = case randomR (fromEnum lo, fromEnum hi) gen of
(item, gen') -> (toEnum item, gen')
genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Int, Operator, Int, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (numbers !! 0, operator, numbers !! 1, gen')
where numbers = randomSensibleInts 2 gen
Solution
The
The
While it is tempting to create a custom instance of
What makes integers in the range [1, 10] any more “sensible” than any other integers? Given how incredibly simple it is, and given it’s only used in one place, I would honestly just inline it into the place it’s used. I think it’s clearer that way than any name you could give it.
Avoid
The
(You also don’t need the type annotation on
Package tuples into named datatypes
The long tuple return type for
Avoid using booleans directly
Using
This also allows adjusting the score summing logic to be a bit more reliable. Using
Avoid mixing pure and impure logic
The
Eliminate unused variables
If you turn on
Use
In the
```
instance Random Operator where
ran
Show typeclass is for debuggingThe
Show typeclass is really meant to be derived, not implemented yourself. The purpose of Show is mostly for debugging, and the closest thing to a law for Show is that it should be the inverse of Read. The result of show should usually be a string that represents a Haskell expression that would produce the value itself.While it is tempting to create a custom instance of
Show for your own purposes, I would just convert your instance into a separate function, showOperator (which can also be implemented more simply with direct pattern matching rather that explicitly using case):showOperator :: Operator -> String
showOperator Add = "+"
showOperator Subtract = "-"
showOperator Multiply = "-"randomSensibleInts is poorly-namedWhat makes integers in the range [1, 10] any more “sensible” than any other integers? Given how incredibly simple it is, and given it’s only used in one place, I would honestly just inline it into the place it’s used. I think it’s clearer that way than any name you could give it.
Avoid
!!The
!! function is unsafe, since it will crash if the provided index is out of bounds. Admittedly, in your case, you know the length of the list will always be exactly 2, so it’s not dangerous, but in that case, you should just use pattern-matching instead:genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Int, Operator, Int, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (x, operator, y, gen')
where [x, y] = take 2 $ randomRs (1, 10) gen
(operator, gen') = random gen(You also don’t need the type annotation on
random gen, so I’ve removed it.)Package tuples into named datatypes
The long tuple return type for
genQuestion is a little bit suspicious. The name even provides a good suggestion for naming the datatype: Question. Create a datatype for that instead of having such a large tuple:data Question = Question Int Operator Int
genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Question, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (Question x operator y, gen')
where ...
askQuestion :: (Question, StdGen) -> IO Bool
askQuestion (Question i1 o i2, gen) = ...Avoid using booleans directly
Using
Bool as a return type of a non-predicate function can be confusing (this is referred to as “boolean blindness”). Using a separate, named type can be both more readable and more scalable if the number of cases ever changes:data AnswerResult = Correct | Incorrect
deriving (Eq)
askQuestion :: (Question, StdGen) -> IO AnswerResult
askQuestion = ...This also allows adjusting the score summing logic to be a bit more reliable. Using
toEnum and assigning significance to the indices is both unnecessary and mixing concerns.putStrLn $ "Your score was " ++ show (length $ filter (== Correct) answers)Avoid mixing pure and impure logic
The
askQuestion function has too many responsibilities: formats a prompt for input, displays it to the user, calculates the answer to the question, validates the answer to the question, and prints out a response based on the answer. Three of those responsibilities are totally pure, and they should ideally be pulled into their own functions:questionPrompt :: Question -> String
questionPrompt (Question x op y) = "Enter the answer to " ++ show x ++ showOperator op ++ show y ++ ": "
questionAnswer :: Question -> Int
questionAnswer (Question x op y) = operatorFunction op x y
where operatorFunction Add = (+)
operatorFunction Subtract = (-)
operatorFunction Multiply = (*)
validateAnswer :: Question -> Int -> AnswerResult
validateAnswer question answer =
if questionAnswer question == answer
then Correct
else Incorrect
askQuestion :: (Question, StdGen) -> IO AnswerResult
askQuestion (question, gen) = do
putStrLn $ questionPrompt question
userAnswer putStrLn "Well done!"
Incorrect -> putStrLn $ "Wrong - the answer was " ++ show (questionAnswer question)
return answerResultEliminate unused variables
If you turn on
-Wall, GHC will tell you that gen is never used in askQuestion at all, so it can be removed:genQuestion :: StdGen -> Question
genQuestion gen = Question x operator y
where [x, y] = take 2 $ randomRs (1, 10) gen
(operator, _) = random gen
askQuestion :: Question -> IO AnswerResult
askQuestion question = do
putStrLn $ questionPrompt question
userAnswer putStrLn "Well done!"
Incorrect -> putStrLn $ "Wrong - the answer was " ++ show (questionAnswer question)
return answerResult
main :: IO ()
main = do
gens <- mapM (const newStdGen) [1..10]
let questions = map genQuestion gens
answers <- mapM askQuestion questions
putStrLn $ "Your score was " ++ show (length $ filter (== Correct) answers)Use
where or let instead of case when there is only one patternIn the
Random instance for Operator, it’s possible to avoid case if you’re simply destructuring rather than matching against multiple patterns:```
instance Random Operator where
ran
Code Snippets
showOperator :: Operator -> String
showOperator Add = "+"
showOperator Subtract = "-"
showOperator Multiply = "-"genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Int, Operator, Int, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (x, operator, y, gen')
where [x, y] = take 2 $ randomRs (1, 10) gen
(operator, gen') = random gendata Question = Question Int Operator Int
genQuestion :: StdGen -> (Question, StdGen)
genQuestion gen = (Question x operator y, gen')
where ...
askQuestion :: (Question, StdGen) -> IO Bool
askQuestion (Question i1 o i2, gen) = ...data AnswerResult = Correct | Incorrect
deriving (Eq)
askQuestion :: (Question, StdGen) -> IO AnswerResult
askQuestion = ...putStrLn $ "Your score was " ++ show (length $ filter (== Correct) answers)Context
StackExchange Code Review Q#139070, answer score: 2
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