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Battleship coordinate picker

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Problem

I present to you... my battleship location picker! This will be part of a larger battleship program. The coordinates that are important are finalcoords.

```
from operator import itemgetter
import getch
import skilstak.colors as c #colors
BOARDLENGTH = 10
BOARDHEIGHT = 10
board = [['_'] * BOARDLENGTH for _ in range(BOARDHEIGHT)]
class Ship():
def __init__(self, size, symbol):
self.size = size
self.symbol = symbol
self.coords = [(x,0) for x in range(size)]
self.previous_coords = [(None,None) for _ in range(size)]
def shift(self,direction):

x_values = list(map(itemgetter(0), self.coords))
y_values = list(map(itemgetter(1), self.coords))
if direction == 'R' and 0 not in x_values:
change = (-1,0)
elif direction == 'D' and BOARDHEIGHT-1 not in y_values:
change = (0,1)
elif direction == 'U' and 0 not in y_values:
change = (0,-1)
elif direction == 'L' and BOARDLENGTH-1 not in x_values:
change = (1,0)
else:
change = (0,0)
for i, coord in enumerate(self.coords):
self.previous_coords[i] = self.coords[i]
self.coords[i] = (coord[0] + change[0], coord[1] + change[1])

def rotate(self):
a, b = self.coords[0][0], self.coords[0][1]
x, y = self.coords[-1][0], self.coords[-1][1]
newx, newy = -(y-b)+a, (x-a)+b
if newy >= 0 and newx >= 0 and newy <= BOARDHEIGHT-1 and newx <= BOARDLENGTH-1:
for i, coord in enumerate(self.coords):
self.previous_coords[i] = self.coords[i]
self.coords[i] = (-(self.coords[i][1]-b)+a, (self.coords[i][0]-a)+b)

def show(self, board, hasprevious=True):
if hasprevious:
for pcoord in self.previous_coords:
board[pcoord[1]][pcoord[0]] = '_'
for coord in self.coords:
board[coord[1]][coord[0]] = self.symbol
display_board = '\n'

Solution

Here are some observations:

  • no meaningful comments or docstrings (they are not always needed, but imagine there is that "violent psychopath, who knows where you live" will be reading the code)



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PEP8 violations and making things Pythonic:

  • blank line between class methods, two blank lines between top-level functions and classes (source)



  • correct import organization



  • the inline comments formatting



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variable naming, if defining a constant, there has to be an underscore between words:

BOARDLENGTH -> BOARD_LENGTH
BOARDHEIGHT -> BOARD_HEIGHT


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a space between arguments after a comma:

ship.show(board, hasprevious=False)
            HERE^


  • no need for extra () after the class definition



  • if intersection == []: can be rewritten as if not intersection:



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simplify the if condition inside the rotate() method, replace:

if newy >= 0 and newx >= 0 and newy <= BOARDHEIGHT-1 and newx <= BOARDLENGTH-1:


with:

if 0 <= newx <= BOARDLENGTH - 1 and 0 <= newy <= BOARDHEIGHT - 1:


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other improvements:

  • looks like you don't need to make the size an instance variable - you only need it in the constructor



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what if instead of multiple repetitive if/else blocks inside the choose_locations(), you would create a mapping between action keys and the shift directions, e.g.:

ACTION_KEYS = {
    'w': 'U',
    's': 'D',
    'a': 'R',
    'd': 'L'
}


Then, we can improve the part determining the shift direction:

key = getch.getch()
if key in ACTION_KEYS:
    ship.shift(ACTION_KEYS[key]) 
    board = ship.show(board)

Code Snippets

BOARDLENGTH -> BOARD_LENGTH
BOARDHEIGHT -> BOARD_HEIGHT
ship.show(board, hasprevious=False)
            HERE^
if newy >= 0 and newx >= 0 and newy <= BOARDHEIGHT-1 and newx <= BOARDLENGTH-1:
if 0 <= newx <= BOARDLENGTH - 1 and 0 <= newy <= BOARDHEIGHT - 1:
ACTION_KEYS = {
    'w': 'U',
    's': 'D',
    'a': 'R',
    'd': 'L'
}

Context

StackExchange Code Review Q#155049, answer score: 5

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